Maybe too short.
I liked this short story although... it's too short ;) I often have this feeling about short stories, that they are like esseys - giving you a grasp of an idea, simple clue about complicated dilemmas. Brady Koch writing reminds me of Polish writer Nowakowski - his stories will always leave you somehow hungry for more. That's why I really love to read collections of short stories (i.e. Bukowski's). Anyway, the plot of the story is somehow expected and writing could be more polished but I am gladly giving high score for the effort and suspance in a few moments that make you wonder and want to read more. I would only suggest turning everything upside down from time to time... but I am grateful for a good black humor that I found here.